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Wow, I know this is late but thank you for the review & thank you writerchick :) x

No problem ;D good luck!

Hii (: Here to review :) Well, I must say, this poem is very beautiful. I felt really sad as the narrator talked about the bruises and how the girl ...

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA MASTERPIECE! x

Thank you so much :) Well, basically, the novel revolves around three female characters, leading seperate lives (unaware of each others' existence). As the story unfolds, the reader will be ...

Woow! All I can say is..AMAZING! You really captured it all so well, it made me feel I was right there but unable to comfort the character. Keep it up! ...

Great job! You really captured the feelings of this character which aroused my pity & sympathy. Well done. x

Review on your edited version: The edited version was in many ways better than the original. You gave more life, more feeling and more thoughts to your character which I ...

Hello peeps ^^ Thank you for commenting. sargsauce, Thanks for explaining :) I'm going to start editing this version soon and notify you when it's complete. Thanks a lot for ...

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAA This is HILARIOUSSS! Not such a big fan of Meyer and not at all of Bella! Looved it! :) x

WOW. This is a very beautiful poem! The rhyming was good but the words were even better. Keep it upp x

My God, i luv this song so much. Great Job! Um...maybe this is 2 much 2 ask but cud u like allow me n ,y band 2 sing it 4 ...

Wow. This really is amazing! The ending, especially, was fascinating. At 1st i thought, it was jus a typical boring story bout sum teenage girl with problems but...Whoa! Luved it ...

Wow. Luved the Ending!! Gr8 Job!

Haha Nice! :D This is 4 all the ppl out there who r TOTALLY obsessed with Twilight. Luv the ending ! x